小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

句式变化较丰富，若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；文中拼写错误比较多，同时请注意积累词汇量；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

I found there are many quarrels and family disputes just because the person who are just care about the feelings of themselves.they don't want to give other person more patience,their expection, anticipate perfection, not improvement.I found there are many quarrels and family disputes just because the person who are just care about the feelings of themselves.they don't want to give other person more patience,their expection, anticipate perfection, not improvement.