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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3006[网页划词已开启]
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题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

The Way to Success There are many kinds of ways leading to success.However,it's not as easy as your imaging.Some people lose their way in committing suicide,having drugs and giving up their education.That sounds a little miserable. Though will there be a lot of things blocking your way,if you can possess the following quality you are closer to success.First of all,you have to be hardworking,for it is the most important part.Plus,you must have a dream lighting your world.Dream is a light-tower,you will never lose your way when facing it.Last but not least,confidence is the power pushing you advance.Only be confident can you have a marvelous life. In my opinion,successful people have different kinds of splendidness,but what they possess in common are hardworking,dream and confidence.When you attach to that point,you are on the way to success.

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