小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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I discovered there are many quarrels and family disputes just because the people who just concern themselves feelings.they don't want to give other people more patience.I discovered there are many quarrels and family disputes just because the people who just concern themselves feelings.they don't want to give other people more patience.I discovered there are many quarrels and family disputes just because the people who just concern themselves feelings.they don't want to give other people more patience.