小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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I realized there are many arguments and family disputes just because the people who just concern themselves.they even don't want to give other people more patience.I realized there are many arguments and family disputes just because the people who just concern themselves.they even don't want to give other people more patience.I realized there are many arguments and family disputes just because the people who just concern themselves.they even don't want to give other people more patience.