字数:200满分:100分
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇。
Small wonder,in judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above diagrams,if we look hard enough,we can observe lucidly that those show that it is with the growth of human population that the number of species has decreased rapidly in America,and even some species have vanished from our planet. When seeing the not uncommon phenomenon that a lot of wildlife becomes extinct,I would not go that far correspondingly,perhaps we have no better way to appreciate it than by exploring the three influential factors.In the first place,So rapid grows the human population that a great number of folks came to live where some wild species have been living.Therefore,these species have to move to other places.Some of them probably cannot adapt to the new environment and die.In the second place,although many citizens look on the wildlife as their friends,some citizens may not think so.They catch a lot of wild animals and sell them in order to get more money.In the third place,in the final analysis,it is as the economy further develops and the procedure of industrialization advances that the natural balance and the ecologic environment are destroyed.The clear cutting has become increasingly serious thus,some of the wildlife become homeless and extinct. In order to protect the wildlife,I have some suggestions.Firstly,the authorities concerned should make laws to prevent them from being caught and killed.Secondly,the government should educate inhabitants to love nature and protect it.Thirdly,as for ourselves,we should take practical actions to protect our living environment.Therefore,only in these ways,have we no difficulty but can protect the wildlife effectively.