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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33638
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩。

用户练习作文:

In my point of view, collect all kinds of coupons and look for group-buy deals or buy clothes in a sale are the common choices of the nowadays customers. For they can benefit a lot from others and low down the price for themselves. But i think none of them is the symptom of being smart customers. On the one hand, it will waste you much time and energy to keep an eye on the goods , whose prices are going to low down , and advertise them freely for the seller to your friends and other customers ,so that you can save a amount of money. On the other hand, whenever the price go down, the goods itself's value had been decreased, too. The food on the coupons are always out of fresh, and not in the exact amount. And the clothes on sale are always ugly and out of fashion. So when you are willing to buy a bargain, it happens usually is that a trash you are going to receive. Sometimes we need to choose from quality and quantity. If we choose the bargain, the good ones fly away. In a conclusion, smart customers should not be the ones who concentrate on the prices only. We need to balance not only the price but also the goods' quality. That's the most important symptom of the smart consumers.

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