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In my point of view, collect all kinds of coupons and look for group-buy deals or buy clothes in a sale are the common choices of the nowadays customers. For they can benefit a lot from others and low down the price for themselves. But i think none of them is the symptom of being smart customers. On the one hand, it will waste you much time and energy to keep an eye on the goods , whose prices are going to low down , and advertise them freely for the seller to your friends and other customers ,so that you can save a amount of money. On the other hand, whenever the price go down, the goods itself's value had been decreased, too. The food on the coupons are always out of fresh, and not in the exact amount. And the clothes on sale are always ugly and out of fashion. So when you are willing to buy a bargain, it happens usually is that a trash you are going to receive. Sometimes we need to choose from quality and quantity. If we choose the bargain, the good ones fly away. In a conclusion, smart customers should not be the ones who concentrate on the prices only. We need to balance not only the price but also the goods' quality. That's the most important symptom of the smart consumers.
