Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请注意分段。
As people always said,if you don't study hard to own a high degree,then you won't have a wonderful life and a better future.And from the picture above,we have the feeling that if you don't go to college,then your life is a mess.We always say that our life is not just about earning money.But you know, without money,we can't do anything .We won't have a happy family.Some man can't find a wife and more and more people lost faith about their future.