2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

As we knows ,campus waste is a common phenomenon among youngsters attending school,and it become more and more serious recently. There are a lot of waste.Waste of food is ranked first.Everyday,we can see many students must pour a third of the food including me.And it has became a bad habits of most students.Secondly,waste of water can't be ignored neither.When we wash some clothes or other things,we will let the water running until we finish washing.Thirdly,waste of electricity is also serious.If only we stay at the domitory,will we let the light on whatever day or night.Besides,there are many other waste. China is a developing country with limited natural sources.We can't afford any waste.As is well known,many people live in the rural areas,they don't have enough things to live on such as food,water.So waste does great harm to the people and society. Therefore,we must stop wasting.As an university students,we should be strict with ourselves and build up a more prosperous and harmonious country.