Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Education pays Investigation points to the fact that in 2011, the higher degree you have,the more weekly earning you will get and the less unemployment opportunities you will be faced . From the graph,it has a strongly compasion of doctoral degree and less than high school diploma.People with doctoral degree can earn 1551 dolars weekly while people with less than high school diploma only earn 451 dolars a week.And we can see that people with high degree have a privilege to be employed and can easier get the jobs than those people who have not.However,when we notice that there is 2.5 percent of people who have doctoral degree are unemployed,we can infer that degree is not represent everything.In spite of you have a doctaral degree ,if you have no skills ,you can not find a job. In my humble opinion,we should hold a radiational attitute toward this issue.To begin with ,we must learn to be confident.In addition,we can realize that degree is not the only key we can find a job,but if you have a degree ,you can find a good job easier than the people who do not have.so ,we have to learn more skills and improve our abilities.Only we are strong enough can we succeed in our fields.