2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

No one can have failed to notice the fact that excessive packaging have become a grave problem which many people have confronted.The excessive packaging severely affected people's consumption.There are three reasons can account for this social phenomenon. First and foremost,along with the rapid growth of economy ,the beautiful packaging goods are popular with people.People are more like to chose beautiful goods.In the second place ,the beautiful packaging make people feel very satisfy.Besides,the beautiful packaging make people feel it was suitable to give to others.Last but by no means least ,the company want to catch people‘s eyes,they adopt excessive packaging to make their goods are better sold. Like a coin has two sides,the excessive packaging has a positive aspect and a negative aspect. From my point of view,i firmly believe that we should packaging the goods in a proper way.