小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Lily is one of my best friends.We are in the same school.We often study and play together.Lily is a A student.Her English is perfect.She often help our classmate with our study.She is helpful.She likes black,and she often wear black clothes.She likes Japan movies.She often watch Japan movies if having free time.