小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

My new teacher Miss Li is my new teacher.She teachs me English.She is beautiful.She has long hair,two big eyes and small red mouth.She is thin.She is strict to me.She gives us much homework.And we make progress in short times.She is kind to us in daily life in school.We all like her very much.She is good at singing.she is smart.She often deal with problems easily.She prefer to cooking and playing volleyball.