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2001年12月英语六级作文真题:给校长写一封信

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:16浏览次数:668
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

假设你是李明,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。

用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

Dearest President: Thank you for sparing your precious time to read the letter.I want to say something about the school dining room.I hope you will consider the problems below. First,the school dining room is not so good as it says.They treat us bad,and when we suggest them improve their service quality,then they don't listen at all and they do not change the service quality.Second,it is not only the service,but the quantity of the food they support,too.Which is very bad,and it tastes very bad,and you can't imagine about it.And third,the price in the school dining room is expensive,which we can't afford the food.And the environment in it is very dirty,which makes us feel bad when we are eating in it. As above,I hope you--dear president,who will come to check what I say above out,and I hope you can find a way to solve the problems in the future.Thank you very much!

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