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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9794
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;全文结构较为严谨;请注意分段。

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On Excessive Packaging As the time goes on,more and more different kinds of products have been sold on different places like supermarkets,stores and the Internet.As a consumer,I am easy to be attracted by the products with more beautiful packaging.The spring festival will soon come,I am prepared some gifts for families and friends.So it is time for shopping.The more pretty a product looks ,the more attention it will get .That is why products have been on excessive packaging all the time.But this situation also brings some negative things like more and more consumers feel they have been cheated by those beautiful look cause the thing inside the packaging is not that good at all.It comes out that people are losing faith in goods.In the end,it will badly affected the economy.

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