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The periodical of our school developed a topic about whether we should recycling textbooks or not .And my opinions are as follows. The mojority of our books are thrown away after we graduated.And it's a waste of paper.The textbooks should be recycled so that we could save the resourse of nature as possible as we can.Moreover, we can find that the cost of our family could be cutted dowm,that is to say,our parents may feel less burden as they expected.Futhermore,the Australia、the USA including many other countries have set up a moral example to us. In this way,not only can we still gain knowledge as it was,but also it's beneficial to people and nature around us.It's really a win-win battle,and just do it !
