拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;从句比例偏少,简单句稍微偏多了。
The newspaper of our school developed a topic about ”Is Recycling Textbooks a Good Suggestion?”.And my opinions are as follows. The majority of the books are thrown away after we graduated from school.And it's a waste of paper which does no good to our environment.The textbooks should be recycled so that we could save the resource of nature as possible as we can.Moreover, we can find that the cost of our family could be cut down,that is to say,our parents may feel less burden as they expected.Furthermore,the Australia,the USA including many other countries have set up a moral example to us. In this way,not only can we still gain knowledge as it was,but also it's beneficial to people and nature which are around us.It's really a win-win battle,and just do it!