回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。
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june 4th 2010 dear wang it's please for us to invited to join the birthday party for congratulating your lovely son birthed year ago.we are very sorry that we won't take part in the birthday party.for i am coming to go back.there is reason that my company has some urgen thing needing to be dealed. in there,we would like give your son the best wish.