小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend, she is a very beautiful, happy girl. She is tall, slim.she has long, curly, brown hair,she has a rosy mouth,she has big ears,she has a big stright nose and narrow eyes. She likes reading books, shopping and listening to music. She is very fancy and helpful.Sometime, she's very quiet,we're always going for a walk on the weekends.