小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend, she is a very beautiful and happy girl. She is tall and slim. She has long, curly and brown hair,she has a red mouth,she has big ears,she has a straight nose and narrow eyes. She likes reading books, shopping and listening to music. She is very charming and helpful.Sometime, she's very quiet, we're always going for a walk on the weekends.