小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend, she is a very beautiful and happy girl. She is tall and slim. She has long, curly and brown hair,she has a red mouth,she has big ears,she has a straight nose and narrow eyes. She likes reading books, shopping and listening to music. She is very charming and helpful.Sometime, she's very quiet and we're always playing tennis on the weekends.