小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend, she is an extremely beautiful and happy girl. She is quite tall and slim. She has long, curly and brown hair,she has a red mouth, big ears, straight nose and narrow eyes. She's excellent at cooking and drawing. She likes reading books, shopping and listening to music. She is pretty charming and helpful.Sometime, she's a little quiet and we're always playing tennis on the weekends. We all like her very much.