2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

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There is a phenomenon that the waste is fierce than before,especially in some college campus.As I see,the bad habit is truly footed in our daily life,but why does it happen? First of all,I have a sense that it is the living condition that matters,the china's rapid economic development has enriched our life,and at the same time increased our demands as consumers,but sometimes