2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

Now with the improvement of the reform and the opening-up policy,our country has become more and more stronger.And the science and technology has improved verh much.Now more and more people prefer going shopping online to hanging out the mall.It has been a fashion.However,no matter how fashional it is,it can also bring problems to us.For example,when we are going to purchase online,we may be exposed to some ill people.They may play some tricks on us,make us believe them, and then they can earn money from our unconsciousness.Although it has some problems,it brings convenience to us.We can easily buy things from the Internet just by clicking on the mouse.So every coin has two points.From my point of view,when we tend to buy something in the Internet,wecan make sure that the website is safe and has certificates.We should also be cautious about the informatation.