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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6290
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中的句子基本没有错误,可适当将文中短句合并为长句;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

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On maintaining Trust Nowadays, wherever you go, you can hear that we are willing to help and support those who maintain the trust. So building and maintaining trust is very important for both individual and organization, while how to build and maintain trust in our life. As an independent person, we need to recognize the importance of trust. In interpersonal relations, making friends with others becomes easier for a person who has good trust than the one who doesn't. We also like those who has the trust. And then, we should try our best to maintain trust. For instance, we can't make promise quickly if we have no confidence to finish something. And if we promise to aid to someone, we'd better to reach the goal which we want to get. As an old saying goes, be slow to promise and quick to perform. We should build and maintain our trust by our behavior and ability.

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