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Small wonder,in judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above bar chart,if we look hard enough,we can observe lucidly that it indicates the CO2 emissions by different transportation modes,from an SUV to a plane to a bus.SUV is the largest contributor,with its emission of 1.6 pounds CO2 per passenger-miles,and car keep abreast of the former,emitting 1.2 pounds.In contrast,if you choose bus,subway or bike,the figure would be no more than 0.4 pounds in the same condition. When seeing the not uncommon phenomenon,I would not go that far correspondingly,probably we have no better way to reduce the CO2 emissions than by implementing the green travel,especially public transport,which makes a positive contribution to the environment and society.On the one hand,public transport has the potential capacity to reduce the transport CO2 emissions,which is a major contributor to local pollution and smog.In this sense, green travel makes the environment clean and gives folks a healthy living circumstances.On the other hand,public transport plays an essential role in reducing the social costs of transport including traffic jam and time taken away from the family while commuting and vulnerability to fuel price increase. Apparently,the best strategy for reducing your impact is walk,bike,or fill up a seat that is a already going your way.In my point of view,no matter where we go,we are supposed to choose green travel.I hope we can protect the environment and save resources through green travel.Therefore,Only in this way,have we no difficulty but can protect our environment and keep fit.