2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；采用了一些简单的从句。

Nowadays，a growing concern over how to success.Success is wonderful, everybody want to be success.But,how to success? As far as I am concerned,perseverance and diligent and talent are the essentials of success.First and foremost,perseverance is extremely significant to success.When i was fresh man in university,i took part in a competition,during the competition i wanted quit many times,because of it was made me so tired and the competition was so challenge.However,i did not do it.I insist on it,then i was the winner.In this competition I never think I will be the winner and then I did it, I am so proud of myself.Moreover, I worked hard for this competition.I practiced many times. From what has been discussed above,we can draw a conclusion that perseverance and diligent are significant to success.Although, the competition is just a small thing in my life, I can realize the way to success,it is significant experience.