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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17434
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
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文章上下文衔接自然;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;作者词汇基础不错,同时请加强单词拼写的检查。

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computer and man nowdays,people are addicted to devising ever more cunning tools to cope with work thatis dangerous,boring,burdensome,or just plain nasty.there is no denying fact that computer is good for our humanbeings life--convenience. it helps us deal with the indicate and enormous work,spares us from a circumactance where our brains being a high-run near to break down state.we can enjoy the beautiful scenes hiding behind the buildings to share a pleasant time with others. just like every coins has two sides that apply to the relationship between computer and man.some yongers are becoming addicted to the computer games who find it difficulit to get back to the real world.it also has a bad bearing on one's future life. so make a proper timetable to arrange your time better is of vital importance at the moment.

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