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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

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Computer and man Nowadays,people are addicted to devising ever more cunning tools to cope with work thatis dangerous,boring,burdensome,or just plain nasty.There is no denying fact that computer is good for our human-beings life--convenience. It helps us deal with the complicated and enormous data-analysis,and spare us from a circumstance where our brains always being a high-running near to break down state.We can enjoy the beautiful scenes hiding behind the buildings to share a pleasant time with others. Just like every coin has two sides that apply to the relationship between computer and man.Some youngers are becoming addicted to the computer games who find it difficult to get back to the real world.It also has a dreadful bearing on one's future life. So make a sound timetable to arrange your time better is of vital importance at the moment.

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