拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
How many people would succeed in the same class?And why are so difference in the same class?The same teachers and the same method of educational that some students fail to go to university,but others gain good achievement.Why are they fortune so distinct.Just because some of they never give up,they have the strong will.That's what the important guarantee of successful. And then,the finish of great mission that person of the strong will could to do it.No matter ancient or today,in spite of international or home,all can't do it without the strong will. The same with us,as a student that eventually never become a talent if no study hard.