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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错。
At the present, a lot of parents do almost everything for their children. For example, washing clothes, cooking meals, cleaning bedrooms are common nowadays in that most of the children are the only child in their families. Parents' extremely care, however, may do harm to children themselves. Children will grow up and have work in society sooner or later. Parents, therefore, should help their children to be independent. First, children should do their own things, such as riding to school, doing homework. Second, less attention should be paid to children so that they will realize they are supposed to accomplish tasks by their own. Last but not least, parents are bond to inform children that they have grown up and been strong enough to deal with challenges in their life. There is no denying that a child who is inspired are confident to be independent from then.
