2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer is a extend of human brain likes car is a assistant of human's leg.The computer extremely improve the development of society ,it makes machine think like a man and many product which have intelligent come out in our life ,hence ,we can watching TV ,drive car and produce more product without worker.the computer is heart of a machine.it changes our life,and we almost can't live without use of a computer.So,some one maybe consider that we maybe replace by computer,that day ,it will full of intelligent robot and they make human to be their slaves as which we had see from films.they are fear to the intelligent computer for that it start to make them out of work and many accident made by the unrelaible computer.Others are happy to see the wild use of computer for that it bring a lot of convenient to their lives .they think a computer like a magical makes fantasy to real ,what's more ,they are confident to human can be control the computer.in my view,we must make good use of computer to make benefit to us.