2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays，a growing concern over how to success.Success is wonderful and everybody wants to be successful.Nevertheless,how to be successful? As far as I am concerned,perseverance,diligent and talent are the essentials of success.First and foremost,perseverance is extremely significant to success.When i was freshman in university,I took part in a competition,during the competition i wanted quit many times,because of it was made me so tired and the competition was so challenge.However,I did not do it and surprise that I was the winner.In this competition I never think I will be the winner and then I did it, I am so proud of myself.Moreover, I worked hard for this competition.I practiced many times. From what has been discussed above,we can draw a conclusion that perseverance and diligent are significantm essential to success.Although, the competition is just a small thing in my life, I can realize the way to success,it is significant experience.