2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays，a growing concern over how to success.Success is wonderful and everybody wants to be successful.Nevertheless,how to be successful? As far as I am concerned,perseverance,diligent and talent are the essentials of success.First and foremost,perseverance is extremely significant to success.When I was a freshman in university,I took part in a competition,during the competition I wanted quit many times,because of it was made me so tired and the competition was so challenge.However,I did not do it and surprise that I was the winner.In this competition I never think I will be the winner and then I did it, I am so proud of myself.Moreover, I worked hard for this competition.I practiced many times. From what has been discussed above,we can draw a conclusion that perseverance and diligent are the essentials to success.Although the competition is just a small thing in my life,nevertheless,it is significant experience for me.