2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays，a growing concern over how to success.Success is wonderful and everybody wants to be successful.Nevertheless,how to be successful? As far as I am concerned,perseverance,diligent and talent are the essentials of success.First and foremost,perseverance is extremely significant to success.When I was a freshman in university,I took part in a competition,during the competition I wanted quit many times,because of it was made me so tired and the competition was so challenge.However,I did not do it and surprise that I was the winner.In this competition I never think I will be the winner and then I did it, I am so proud of myself.Moreover, I worked hard for this competition.I practiced many times. From what has been discussed above,we can draw the conclusion that perseverance and diligent are the key to success.Although the competition is just a small thing in my life,nevertheless,it is significant experience for me.