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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9572
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
要求
1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;文章层次较为清晰。

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There is a famous saying does like this,"Have an aim in life,or your energy will be all wasted."People now in the job market world should take the awareness of setting an aim,which is very important for our future and drive us energetic.However,people always attach little important of it. In my opinion,setting an aim is useful and it is the first step towards success.Aims Always are the steppingstones of success.Setting an aim can help you find which way you should go and how you accomplish.It may make you full of energy and have the energy to do something that is good for your bright future.Meanwhile,an aim sometimes is the small thing,but you should also do it well and try your best to achieve it,as it is the accumulation of the big ones. In a word,setting an aim is essential.As college students ,we should always keep a dream and an aim,which will make us confident and successful.

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