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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3003
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题目 The Way to Success
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1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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There is no denying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic that whether college students should be allowed to get married.Some time ago,the ban was lifted by some universities on getting married.To this people's attitudes differ sharply.Some hold the positive view,they said that most college students are adults and that it is a basic right for those who have reached the appropriate age to get married. Many others,however,hold the opposite view,they claim that the university and college is a place to study instead of a community to lead a family life.Allowing college to get married would adversely affect their study.For instance,they could spend to much time attending their family and life,unable to concentrate on their school work. As far as I am concerned,I believe that it is OK to allow college students to get married.Anyway,this is their freedom.Actually,we don't have to worry too much because facts show that most college students would choose not to get married in the face of such fierce competition and heavy school work.

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