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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6295
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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The human race has entered a new stage in its history,with increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization,More problems are brought to our attention such as trusting each other.In other words,it is widely and commonly accepted by the individuals from all walks of life that people should trust each other has gained increasingly attention. What exactly contributes to such phenomenon?It's a thought-provoking question.First and foremost,cooperation plays a vital role in the course of achieving a goal,which may put people in a favorable position in the job markets.Moreover,it can play our abilities into full play,so we can't emphasize the importance of the trust too much. Confronted with such phenomenon.Effective measures must be taken before things get worse.In the first place,the public should enhance the importance of the consciousness of the trust.In the second place,it is essential that laws and regulations should be worked and enforced to an end to the trend.Only with these measures taken can we except to solve the problem.

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