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2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:46浏览次数:3100
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题目 My opinion on certificate craze
要求
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇。

用户练习作文:

Recently,numerous students ignored the study of Chinese,it has drawn attention from the public and fierce debates are right on their way. Then what underlies the strange phenomenon?There are several reasons for this:first and foremost,as we all know,Chinese is our mother tongue,a number of students take it granted that Chinese is extremely simple to grasp; besides,some of them think that it is boring and old-fashioned to study Chinese.Neglecting the study of Chinese,nevertheless,contributes to some undesirable consequences,for instance,students will overlook the Chinese culture finally. In order to enhance the situation,from my perspective,it is high time that we should take several particularly effective measures,for a start,we should educate our classmates to recognize the importance of learning Chinese,second,we should implement a army of interesting activities about the study of Chinese,the last but not least,we should adversity the significance of learning Chinese by television or other means.

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