湖南衡阳市八中2013届高三5月月考试卷英语作文

衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查。

While the internet shoping has been a fashion that almost milions of people will shop online during their daily life. Why do we such perfer to shop online?In my opinions,the very first reason,the cost,which that we don't need to spend as much money as shopping mall.And the second reason I think is convienced,that means we can buy anything whenever we want and wherever we are.But the only drawback is that we cannot try the products in the flash. So I suggest that the online shop can set some trying room for customers to try out in the reality.