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More and more people are enthusiastic about examination of various kinds of certificates now, which becomes a craze in recent years. Different people hold different purposes of examination of certificates. For some people, a certificate means en entrance of job, in which people who keep a certificate can take part. For other people, it is always good to get more certificates regardless whether it works or not. In their opinion, if one gets more certificates, he may have more chance and more edge in fierce competition. Based on this theory, it is not strange any more that more and more people are fond of examination of certificates. As far as I am concerned, whether to take the examination of certificates or not is up to people’s different situation. It’s not necessary for everyone to get a certificate and what’s more, a certificate can not inflect your competence in actual. In a word, people should treat certificates more wisely and make correct decisions.
