拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。
As it is known to us all,it's pretty commonplace for us students to surf the internet like playing games or shopping online,which has definitely brought us a large amount of convenience. However,different people hold various opinions on the Internet.On the one hand,some believe that it is the Internet that can help make our study and work more efficient for the reason that it is pretty available for us to get help from the Internet.On the other hand,other pessimistically think that not only will teenagers be addicted to the Internet,which influences students' study in a bad aspect,but also their health can be seriously affected. When it comes to my ideas,I firmly believe that we have to treat the Internet in a correct attitude.For example,we can use it as a way of relaxing but it shouldn't be an provider of answers.With a healthy attitude,the Internet can benefit us a lot.