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Xiao Wang,welcome to Guilin.I am so happy to hear you coming here soon,and which will make me feel exciting to see the beautiful vision here with you.I sincerely hope you will have an unforgettable journey with me. We all know that we should make a plan when you come.And I suggest you consider my advice.First,you should have a clear mind about your week-long holiday.By that way you can spend less time to view more places here.Second,I hope you have a book about Guilin,then you will know the places you want to visit.Third,you'd better to take a camera with you,when we are enjoying the lovely places here then we can take some photos,and which will leave us some wonderful memories. Not only the above,when you come here you should take care of yourself.You'd better to take medicines with you,just in case.You can take an umbrella,and be careful about your money during you come here.
