2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

From the chart,we could get a message about the weekly earnings in 2010.This chart implys the higher education can offer the higher income.who is get the doctoral degree could get the higest income-$1551,the second is master's degree-$1272, and the lowest income-$444，which is the less than a high school diploma. As well as we know,the society has ripay development at present day,more and more high educated worekers are needed,such as the people who got the doctoral degree,master's degree and bachelor's degree.The blue workers are not necessary in the developed countries,so a man ought to have the high education only a high school diplima. Broading speaking, nowadays, everyone should get the high education and achieve more knowledges.