2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加学术词汇的使用量；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the development of the technology,there is a normal thing that more and more people have become depending on their computers.As is known to all ,the computer can give us abundant things,such as knowledge,communication and so on. But it's known to us that there are many adolescents losing in it.They will drop school to play computer games ,which is harm to their growth.And a bit of people who know some abnormal ways fool us by the internet.So when we use our computer,we must keep an eye on these people. On the other hand,computer has kinds of advantages.It make our lives more convinent.We can get almost every things at home though it.Nowadays,online shopping is more and more popular.In my view,it will take place of face to face shopping in the future. In my life ,now I am just a colege ,the computer is important for me .Studying can't without it.