2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

Nowadays,many children are dependent on their parents to do all the things for them.Such phenomenon is common in China.It is no wonder that many youngster coddled by indulgent parents and nurtured by the internet can hardly make their own decisions.This explains why parents do a lot for their spoiled child. As far as I am concerned,as many children are becoming increasingly dependent on their parents,adults ought to permit their kids to choose a life style they like and do not intervene in it.Many kids have their own ideas which shouldn't be ignored.Likewise,parents are suggested to share household chores with their kids,which is benefical for children's grow. In a word, only if students are given more freedom and more choice could they live more independent.