2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

With the development of society and technology,computer has become a indispensable role in our daily lives.I can not imagine man live without computer nowadays,however,computer bring not only advantages to us,but also disadvantages. In one side,man created computer to help ourselves to do many important and difficult things.We get information from computer,study and entertain on computer.Computer is a best companion of man .In other side,we rely on computer,which makes man lose thinking sometimes.And use computer too long makes man unhealthy.besides,we make friend with computer and sometimes forget our real friends in our lives,we should spend more time on communicating with man beside us. In summary,the disadvantages of computer cannot weigh against the benefits when man use it correctly.