2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

Nowadays,many children are dependent on their parents to do all the things for them.Such phenomenon is common in China.It is no wonder that many children coddled by indulgent parents and nurtured by the internet can hardly make their own decisions.This explains why parents do a lot for their dependent kids. As far as I am concerned,as many children are becoming increasingly dependent on their parents,adults ought to permit their kids to choose a life style they like and do not intervene in it.Many kids have their own ideas which shouldn't be ignored.Likewise,parents are suggested letting their kids do some household chores,which is beneficial for children's grow. In a word, only if students are given more freedom and more choice could they live more independent.