2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the development of society and technology,computer has played a indispensable role in our daily lives.I can not imagine man live without computer nowadays,however,computer brings not only advantages to us,but also disadvantages. In the one hand,man created computer to help ourselves to do many crucial and difficult things.We get information from computer,study and entertain on computer.Computer is a best companion of man .In the other side,we rely on computer,which makes man lose imagination sometimes.And use computer too long makes man unhealthy.besides,we make friend with computer and sometimes forget our real friends in our lives,we should spend more time in communicating with man beside us. In summary,the disadvantages of computer cannot weigh against the benefits when man use it correctly.