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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46209
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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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From the cartoon,we can see that a student is busy with fighting for various kinds of certificates to cater the appetite of unknown employers.Exaggerated as it is,it is not an unusual view on campus. There are many reasons account for this phenomenon.Primarily,a growing number of employers believe that the more certificates you possess,the more capable you are,which can be the driver of this epidemic.Additionally,it is the future full of unknown and indeterminacy that makes students confused.Consequently,they can do nothing but fight for certificates to enrich their college life. From my perspective,certificates are indispensable for job hunting,but we also need to enhance our integrated qualities.Only when you become a diversified talent can you achieve your career.

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