Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
From the cartoon,we can see that a student is busy with fighting for various kinds of certificates to cater the appetite of unknown employers.Exaggerated as it is,it is not an unusual view on campus. There are many reasons account for this phenomenon.Primarily,a growing number of employers believe that the more certificates you possess,the more capable you are,which can be the driver of this epidemic.Additionally,it is the future full of unknown and indeterminacy that makes students confused.Consequently,they can do nothing but fight for certificates to enrich their college life. From my perspective,certificates are indispensable for job hunting,but we also need to enhance our integrated qualities.Only when you become a diversified talent can you achieve your career.