题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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In the past year or two,a growing number of people begin loss the trust to others.A diversity of report appear in the media,from newspapers to TV to Internet,show us that help stranger may be make ourselves in trouble.As the result of these phonomon,a host of people said that they are fear to help other. this topic is on the lip of everyone,a weath of people loss the trust to stranger,thanks to the fear be deception.we should take some action to maintian trust in the society.firstly,government ought to set the law to aviod helper be cheat so that people dear to help others which stand in trouble.Besides,media could report some positve thing that can encourage people to do that things.Last but not least,we should take human's nature characater into consideration and firmly believe that the good person is bigger than the bad one.Only in the three way can maintain trust to others.